Rebekah Hendershot

Rebekah Hendershot

After You've Written

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Table of Contents

Section 1: Application Essays
Overview

11m 8s

Intro
0:00
First Things First
0:08
Don't Panic!
0:39
Lesson Overview
1:31
What They Aren't Looking For
2:10
Perfection
2:15
Genius
2:45
Flattery
3:16
What They Are Looking For
3:48
Preparation
3:52
Talent
4:47
Fit
5:26
How This Course Will Work
6:42
Remember the Balance Beam
8:37
Balance Beam Story
8:47
The Prompt

18m 20s

Intro
0:00
Lesson Overview
0:07
Experience Prompts
0:55
Example 1
1:03
Example 2
1:11
Example 3
1:17
Influence Prompts
1:31
Select a Creative Work
1:46
Analysis Prompts
2:34
Examples
2:45
Explanation Prompts
3:11
Examples
3:23
'What If?' Prompts
4:08
Examples
4:19
What These Prompts Have in Common
4:47
You Can Write About Things Before You Enter the School
4:51
They All Use Skills Needed in School of Choice
5:40
How to Answer Experience Prompts
5:57
What to Pick
6:19
Example
6:49
How to Answer Influence Prompts
8:13
What to Pick
8:37
Example
9:50
How to Answer Analysis Prompts
10:35
What to Pick
11:02
Example
11:18
How to Answer Explanation Prompts
12:46
What to Pick
13:00
Example
13:33
How to Answer 'What If?' Prompts
14:21
What to Pick
14:26
Example
14:54
When in Doubt
16:28
Choosing a Topic

13m 27s

Intro
0:00
Lesson Overview
0:07
Read the Prompt
0:39
Kind of Prompt
0:41
Look for Main Idea
1:29
Describe a Character
2:14
Look for the Underlying Theme
3:06
Role Models
4:07
Look for Technical Specifications
5:02
Choose a Topic
6:59
Analyze What You're Given
7:09
How to Analyze a Quote
7:43
Do a Little Research
9:53
Write What You Know
11:25
When in Doubt
12:15
Outlining

15m 39s

Intro
0:00
Lesson Overview
0:07
What is an Outline?
0:43
A Sample Essay
1:07
Prompt
1:19
Choosing Your Outline Style
1:55
Formal Outline
1:59
Introduction
2:10
Using My Brain
3:28
Advantages
4:39
Disadvantages
5:23
Mnemonic Outline
6:02
A Mnemonic Outline
6:45
Essay
6:56
Introduction
7:05
Thesis
7:16
Body Paragraphs
7:24
Conclusion
8:59
Choosing Your Outline Style
10:47
Advantages
10:49
Disadvantages
11:37
Which Outline is Right for You?
12:25
Use a Formal Outline If…
12:34
Use a Mnemonic Outline If…
13:17
Testing Your Outline
13:55
Test on Yourself
14:02
Test on Someone Else
14:29
When in Doubt
15:06
Writing Part One: The Beginning

18m 12s

Intro
0:00
Lesson Overview
0:09
What is a Hook?
1:11
Famous First Sentences
1:26
Example 1
1:31
Example 2
2:21
Example 3
2:39
Example 4
3:22
How to Write a Good Hook
3:56
Start with an Arresting Image
4:04
Use an Idea That Piques Your Interest
6:06
Use Surprise
8:37
Have Fun!
10:09
Your Thesis Statement
11:27
How to Find Your Thesis Statement
11:46
Make a List of Strongest Ideas
11:54
Thesis Will be the Idea You Can Write About Most Ably
12:12
Where to Place Your Thesis Statement
12:47
In a Traditional Essay
12:52
First Sentence in Essay
14:06
At the End
14:58
When in Doubt
17:05
Writing Part Two: The Middle & End

14m 7s

Intro
0:00
Lesson Overview
0:13
The Three Parts of a Good Essay
0:58
The Middle: Details, Details, Details!
1:15
Middle
1:40
Structure Correctly
2:02
Pacing is Key!
3:30
How to Write a Winning Conclusion
5:43
Good Conclusion
6:07
Echoes
6:33
Callbacks
6:45
Best Conclusions Evolve From Theses
7:09
Essay Example
8:18
Essay Example Continued
8:39
Have Fun!
10:28
When in Doubt
12:21
Revision

14m 35s

Intro
0:00
Lesson Overview
0:07
Take a Break!
1:02
Revision vs. Proofreading
1:27
Revision
1:36
Proofreading
1:54
Deep Revision
2:25
What Is It?
2:28
Did You Answer the Prompt?
2:58
Did You Choose the Right Topic?
3:45
Did You Organize Your Answer Well?
4:21
Did You Leave Out Anything Important?
5:07
Did You Pad Your Response?
6:50
Get a Second Opinion
7:36
Beta Reader
8:21
Writing Circle
9:40
The 90/ 10 Rule of Second Opinions
12:11
What Is It?
12:25
When in Doubt
13:49
After You've Written

12m 31s

Intro
0:00
Lesson Overview
0:08
Proofreading
0:51
Definition
1:07
Mark Errors
1:16
Spelling, Grammar, & Mechanics
2:20
Check Your Spelling
2:24
Check Your Grammar
2:51
Check the Mechanics of Your Writing
3:26
Use Human Eyes
4:01
Proofreading Resources
4:55
Style Manuals
5:01
Stylebooks
5:19
Professionals
6:20
Amateurs
6:38
Sending in Your Essay
6:56
The Stupid Check
7:08
List of Stupid Things You May Have Done
7:32
Send It In
9:43
Rule
10:13
Relax!
10:31
After You Send It It
10:57
Waiting for a Response is Part of the Test
11:26
When in Doubt
11:57
Competitive Schools

14m 29s

Intro
0:00
Lesson Overview
0:08
Calm Down!
2:13
Similar Essay Questions
2:33
Similar Prompts
3:00
Experience Prompt
3:08
Influence Prompt
3:33
Analysis Prompt
4:28
Explanation Prompt
5:09
'What if?' Prompt
5:56
But Don't Calm Down That Much!
6:38
High-Pressure Environments
6:48
Large Applicant Pools
8:19
How, and When, to Gush
9:33
Be Excited!
9:57
Don't Make Things Up
10:33
Be Yourself & Do Your Best
11:20
When in Doubt
12:58
Specific Fields

14m 43s

Intro
0:00
Lesson Overview
0:10
Some Things Don’t Change
1:26
Same General Qualities
1:29
Essay Questions
1:41
Question Types and Examples
2:03
Experience Prompt
2:30
Influence Prompt
2:56
Analysis Prompt
3:49
Explanation Prompt
4:37
'What if?' Prompt
5:17
Do Your Research
6:21
Read the School's Website
6:47
Talk to People
7:27
Craft a Major-Specific Resume
8:38
Emphasize Relevent Parts of Your Background
9:03
Get the Intangibles
9:20
Be Creative
9:55
When in Doubt, Tell a Good Story
12:07
Make a Prioritized List
12:26
Why Good Stories Help
13:19
When in Doubt
13:59
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Post by Aniket Dhawan on December 17, 2012

Excuse me, but I just wanted to know whether you could check some essays that I've written. this is just as my parents don't check my work and I really want to improve.

By the way thanks for the lesson.

After You've Written

  • Proofread your work for mechanical errors: mistakes in spelling, grammar, and punctuation.
    • Check your spelling. Yes, it seems stupid and obvious, but many readers will put down a piece of writing the first time they come to a misspelled word.
    • Check your grammar. Make sure that your subjects and verbs agree, that you’re using the right voice and tense, that your pronouns aren’t all over the place, etc. Poor grammar is the mark of an undereducated writer.
    • Check the mechanics of your writing—punctuation, syntax, all that stuff.  It only takes one mistake to ruin your essay.
  • Use human eyes. As the old joke goes, “Don’t relay on spell check!”
  • Proofreading resources include style manuals (like Strunk & White’s The Elements of Style), stylebooks such as the Associated Press stylebook, professionals (there are professional editors out there who will correct your mechanics for a fee), and amateurs (including any grammar Nazis you know).
  • Once you’ve finished your proofreading, do a “stupid check” and make sure you’ve done all the obvious things that people so often forget:
    • Did you correctly follow all the steps involved in writing your essay?
    • Did you follow the directions on the application?
    • Have you added anything you weren’t supposed to add?
    • Have you left anything out that you were supposed to include?
    • Are you putting the right materials (all of them) into the right envelope to go to the right school?
    • Are you including correct postage?
    • Did you put your name on it?
    • Are you meeting your deadlines, or do you need to ask for an extension?
    • Did you remember to click “Send”?
  • When you’ve finished everything, send your essay in as soon as possible so it doesn’t make you crazy.
  • Then relax! You’ve earned it, and waiting for a response is hard enough without stressing yourself out. Waiting for an answer is both a part of the process and arguably the hardest part, so take it easy!
  • When in doubt:
    • Have the toughest English major you know go over your writing for errors.
    • Get a professional to check your work.
    • Consult a style manual.
    • “Don’t relay on spell check.”
    • Do your stupid check.
    • Send it in as soon as possible for the sake of your own sanity.
    • Relax!

After You've Written

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  • Intro 0:00
  • Lesson Overview 0:08
  • Proofreading 0:51
    • Definition
    • Mark Errors
  • Spelling, Grammar, & Mechanics 2:20
    • Check Your Spelling
    • Check Your Grammar
    • Check the Mechanics of Your Writing
  • Use Human Eyes 4:01
  • Proofreading Resources 4:55
    • Style Manuals
    • Stylebooks
    • Professionals
    • Amateurs
  • Sending in Your Essay 6:56
  • The Stupid Check 7:08
    • List of Stupid Things You May Have Done
  • Send It In 9:43
    • Rule
  • Relax! 10:31
    • After You Send It It
    • Waiting for a Response is Part of the Test
  • When in Doubt 11:57
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